Comments : I do(n't) want him near me

  • 13 years ago

    by Kayla

    Awww.. it was so sad at first but had a nice ending. Even though it was short, I personally liked it. It was very good and I love the rhythem of the poem. Great job, keep it up!! 5/5 <3

    ~Loveless Nights~

  • 13 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Great poem, excellently written. I like the twist in the end. Really good flow. 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Hebe

    Sad in the beginning, happy in the end.
    Nice written.
    Well done

  • 13 years ago

    by Lemma

    I was looking for a poem to read and the title of this one really caught my eye. Really clever idea, I like the repetition of the "I do/don't want him near me." Very effective.

    Em xXx

  • 12 years ago

    by NoUr

    Lovely..i liked it..the title was the best :D..plz keep writing!!