Comments : Have You Ever...?

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    ...Yes, I have.

  • 16 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    Everyones = Everyone's

    if its = if It's

    There people = They're people

    Not a good poem at all, to be honest with you. Yes, it is under the right section, but your poem didn't get in touch whatsoever with any emotional aspect of me. I didn't find this poem attractive.... and being such a short poem it needs to be hard-hitting right off the bat. This is wasn't.
    Your word use wasn't that intricate either, and I didn't find anything spectacular. To keep your 2 votes of 5.0 I will refrain from voting, but just to let you know I would not have rated this well at all.

    I'm sorry for such a harsh comment, but it's the truth. Make your poems more touching, more emotional, more honest. This poem just... didn't hit the spot. Maybe it's just me.

    not 5/5
    ~Stephen White