Comments : Sweet Release

  • 16 years ago

    by ThePrincess

    I like your poem! is it about a cheating spouse?

  • 16 years ago

    by Robyn

    Short but very sweet!
    Robyn xoxo

  • Thankz for the coments...
    To ThePrincess: More like a cheating EX-lover...

  • 16 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Wow! Very good! Kinda sad, though...

  • 16 years ago

    by TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

    Boys....
    Well, that was a really sad poem full of emotion, hope you are better now. The wording worked very well, I like you style. Keep it up!
    Merry Xmas ^^,

    ...TILLmyLASTtearFALLS...

  • 16 years ago

    by Bre Monique

    Oh wow, that was great! I loved the ending! The only thing I'd say is is it supposed to say deep breathe or deep breathing? Other then that it's an easy 5/5