Omg that wuz deep the part i think it goes "u run your hand down and feel every curve" its somthing liek that i realy liked thta part

Nice!
Robyn xoxo

Really sweet poem. good rythme

I like it :)

It's vivid and has an interesting ending.

Your poem is really good!!5/5

I really like this poem.
u always make me think of you know who god we are so alike :)
love ya lds
xx

Oh this was good.loved the ending.
thank you for the comment.
best wishes
and take care
your friend
emmeline

Its def vivid but leaves enough to the imagination. i totally pictured a beach night scene to stick that in. lol. great poem!