Short and sweet =] great effort =D me is liking!

Matt x

Thats good i loved it keep it up 5/5 ~MELISSA~

AWESOME POEM! if you leave out the last entire line thing..it would be better

Hey ali i just wanted to tell you u sound like me i wirte to stop cutting to mi parents are devorced btu mi step is the same way so keep writign your really good

V mournful but superb with a great flow n awsome meanings. U deserve 5/5.
plx read my etheree

With love
Fsams