I'm not to sure about this...I don't really get the meaning behind a dream...unless there is no meaning, it's just a dream?
I did like the imagery you painted though, it created vivid pictures and I thought the flow was good throughout.

Very nice poem. I didn't really get it though. 4/5

It was a tad confusing
but then good
i don't really know what i feel about this poem
4/4 from me

Oh, yay!

This is like my writing style! Haha!
[[That was my joy moment...]]
Honestly, this is very nice. I love the abstract[ness] to it, and the title just... Well, I read it cause of the title. So there you go.
And, don't worry if people don't get it, all that matters is what you think of it... [[And I Effin Love It!]]
Like, omg. I feel like such a... like fan, like, freak, like, like...[[heh.]]

Hmmmmm i totaly agree wiht this. that was grat work. 5/5

Lol. All I have to say about that is that it's pretty funny.

Lol.

I don't really understand what it's about... is it a real dream or just made up?

It is after all pretty creative.

I particularly enjoyed your currect use of punctuation, capitalization, and spelling.

Well done.
5/5
~Stephen White