Comments : King of Ineptitude

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Ben
    This is a awesome poem. So sad and brings a tear to the eye. The imagery and word choices are Excellent. You draw the reader right into your writing.

    Warm tears of frustration, a young man does his best.
    Soul emptied by terrible losses only questions left.

    I hope you find your answers. These lines tore my heart.
    Love you
    Cindy