Comments : She is Not Worth it...

  • 14 years ago

    by Sammie Jo

    ~Good Job~

  • 14 years ago

    by Viola

    Incredibly good! i love this. you're work choice is brilliant and the emotion is deep. 5/5 =] keep it up

  • 14 years ago

    by Debbie

    There are, indeed, a few issues about forced lines which have disrupted the flow. But it's not enough to affect my overall assessment of this piece :). In fact, I loved how you created an outstanding piece which simply breathes out Poetry by using a lot of metaphors throughout, whilst maintaining the heartrending sentiments as well. I admired your consistency, dear! Keep them coming! 5/5


  • 14 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Cool poem. It ws great and the length was good. It was easy to read and to understand. The flow was really good and the word choice was nice. I gave it a 5/5.

  • 14 years ago

    by e LIZ a beth

    OH MY GOOOOOODNESS!! its so effing good. bef your bestest!!

  • 14 years ago

    by sadeyes

    I love your poem and keep up the good work

  • 14 years ago

    by Bonnie

    This poem is so great i really loved it. Its really well written i almost shed some tears.

    it was really great.

  • 14 years ago

    by nikki

    It was nicely written, this has to be my most favorite by you. it was great, excellent work 5/5

  • 1 year ago

    by Vanessa

    The flow is a little off but not bad at all I does paint a descriptive picture about how if you are told your worthless enough you believe excellent