Excellent poem, I enjoyed reading it. You're really good writer. First stanza is my favorite, but I like the rest of the poem,too.

Wow, superbly written poem. Imagery is incredible and topic is unique. Wording is amazing. You created haunting atmosphere.
Well done! This poem deserves more than 5/5

Oh such a powerful strong poem, very unique very different frm everything i read so far... :D
well done!!!!!!!!!!

This was a good poem, excellent really. i liked the rhythm and everything. keep writing!