Damn u can't stop can u so excited abot this a new poem
and i must say it was beta den i expected they alwayz r as always u wrote abot sometin true and real something that ppl hv 4gotten abot it's gud 2 no dat der r ppl in this world dat still rmbr and will nva 4get and wanna make a difference in this messd up world
racsism, discrimination and stereotypes r neva gud but sum ppl CHOOSE not 2 understand
loved it
love you

peace- paz

Good.. good.. good

Awesome!!
If only.....
If only people would take this to heart and understand. You have penned a marvelous poem and it speaks for itself. The imagery and vocabulary were wonderful. Great Job.
BTW thanks for the comment.

Dixie

"Human rights are forgotten and breached
Power and greed glazed in the white mans eyes
Slavery was to meet the hands of fate
The beginning of oppression
To spark the war of aggression" I would like to see another poem from you with similar meaning.

Hey! This was a really good poem. I could really see all the images you created with your choice of words. Keep up the awesome work!

~Astryd

BLESSED M I FOR I GOT CONNECTED TO
YOU !!
THIS IS AN ICREDIBLE POEM !!
THE VOCABULARY IS AWESOME !!
5/5

I love people is made me cry....i am so against slavery...awesome poem

ashleigh

This is an amazing poem.
This is my favorite out of all of your poems I have read so far, and I must say that this is one of my favorite poems. (I will add it to my favorite poems list =])
Your use of words is fantastic and the message you are trying to show readers is crystal clear. This is a fantastic poem, keep it up you are extremely talented.
<3jess

I lthink this is good i really like it, keep on writing

Equality in history was never carved into stone
A philosophy of superiority came to existence-great lines.
This poem is so deep and true. I am impressed. Your vocab is incredible and I like the topic very much. 5/5

This one is really good and very true. The World is a sad place, especially in this day in age. It seems morals are not a big part in anyones life. Very good. :]

Thanks so much for the comment. :]
Please do view some of my other poems I am very excited to see what you think of them.
I really do appreciate your comment.

Very good, interesting and unique subject matter expressed through the eyes and mind of an obviously talented poet.

Trav,

That contains the fact as it is about this world we are iving in, good job. I feel like i have to read your poem everyday.

Wow,this is amazing!!seriously!!WOW!! your definaly very very talented