This is a very good poem which has a very easy flow to read with it. well done i like it xxxxxxx

Ludicrous to think of which,
A life I do depend,
Pressures clot and bank,
Still nothing to desend,

^^Perfect vocab...simple n well chosen words put togthr to give power to this poem...it flowed well..n great peice!=)

5/5!

xxPoojaxx

This is really a wonderfully written poem...it flows very nicely, the vocabulary is very strong and the last line "I was pushed into the waste" made me go wow...
beautiful sad poem...
5/5
*isabel*