Comments : I wonder

  • 16 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    This so true. You always know how to tell the truth so plainly put, and other struggle with trying to pen these words and how that emotion makes them feel. Truly we never know how love will end up but it is better to have loved and lost than to have never loved at all. As always wonderful Job.
    Your Friend,
    Kay

  • 16 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    You really take this thing as truths..you stated the truth behind the symbold and things
    My fave lines should be;

    So you push it to the limit, just see how far you will go
    and it goes on forever it seems, but when it hits you will know.

    Good job tracy
    Your friend,
    Laura

  • 16 years ago

    by The Unwritten Love

    I loved that poem a lot .. deep inside from my heart ./. it explain what am going through now ... great poem ... and good job

  • 16 years ago

    by Skulblaka Sverda

    You have sooo many poems that are sooo good, :-) Great job!

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    This poem is so emotional and touching. It is written greatly. Well done, this piece is sad because it is so true. Anyway you created excellent and original atmosphere wonderfully. It deserves 5/5