This is good! I really, really like it!
~Kayla

Very good ,beautifully written.Thats how love should be ,but sometimes its not always so.

This is so good and realistic this poem is awesome.. i simply loved the way it worked so perfectlyyyy....its perfectly fluent..
keep it up :)
great work and can you check out some of my poems and tell me what you think.thankz....and 5/5

Wow!! this is really good.. I am touched with this poem.. the emotions are overflowing.. great job!