I like it

That was good keepit up 5/5

Wow...very deep..and so strong...i liked it..

good poem! 5/5

~Michelle~

I got the message fine
but the emotion was lacking a bit
it needs some improvement but its good
4/5

Wow....ths poem was so vivid to me...great job! i hope that didnt really happen though. you are an awesome writer. =)

This is a great poem, I don't even know what to say. I hope it wasn't something that really happened. 5/5

Beautiful poem. 5/5