This was amazing. I've been writing for 2 and a half years. And Wow..That was really good. The imagery was amazing. The rhyme and flow were perfect. You did an excellent job. Keep up the good work. It was truly amazing.
5/5
-Heather

Damn that's cool, nice metaphor too, love is very stormy, hope you find the sunshine! 5/5
Helen

That was great! Keep doing your thing!

Sweet stuff, amazing work keep it up ;)

I really enjoyed reading this, it looks like you put a lot of effort into it.

thanks for the poem comments, too. ^_^

I loooooved the imagery in it. i feel like i could be there!

keep it up girlie!

ღlizzy

This poem has such an amazing description!!
so well put .. and very imaginative.. i can picture what your saying!! good job :)
<3 ang
5/5

Very descriptive and deep, you did a really good job.

I love this one. Seriously. I like how I can picture everything. Great work.