Comments : Defy

  • 16 years ago

    by xPerfect Chaosx

    Wow Ciao!! I love this one of yours sweetie!!! Just wow!! I absouletly love it!! You are such an awesome writer!! My favorite lines were:

    My heart it healed; no more holes and rust.
    I'm able to love; I'm able to trust.

    I love that!! lol, great job as always love!! The flow and everything is spectatular!! (Jeeze.. I'm running out of synomyns for the word awesome, lol) 5/5 for defintely sure!!!

    Much Love,
    Your Wifey <3 <3

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    ''My heart it healed; no more holes and rust.
    I'm able to love; I'm able to trust.''

    I adore those lines, they are beautiful.

    I loved this, imagery used was amazing, flow was flawless throughout and the opening really pulls the reader in with each stanza from there getting better and better.

  • 16 years ago

    by moonlil

    I love this poem. It's so great to read.