Comments : To me it was so much more

  • 16 years ago

    by XfromwithinX

    I dont really understand but tis obveiosly something personal. well done
    x

  • 16 years ago

    by Jacob

    Tummy dulls the feeling of the poem i think stomach would go better but it is a good poem and it draws a picture that I can almost make out....but its good is this one u did in your drunkin madness?

  • 16 years ago

    by sara

    Good poem ans has great emotion in it 5/5