Awww...this is soo filled wth hurt thoughts n fading hope n fera n lots and lots of emeotions....hey on a personal line..i think u shud never give up hope..n find confidence in yourself....believe tht watever u r u r blessed...then lol...u'll find the whole world befoire you respecting u.....just a thought!=)
n The poem...is deep...touching...lovely penned..n perfect..
This poem is really deep and emotional, very personal too.
'I am afraid to show who I really am,
afraid of being turned away, hurt, like every time before,
so if you or anyone else is wondering at any point in time,
that is why I am constantly blocked by my inner door.'
This was my favorite part of the poem. Never be afraid to show who you really are. If people don't like you for who you are who cares what others think as long as your proud with yourself and confident!!
xx Rox Keep it up babe!
I agree with the majority of the comments already posted that you have written a very deep and presonnel emotional write. You should not be afraid to show ho you really are young lady. May you one day find the peace and joy you seek in your heart each and everyday. Take care young lady and keep on writing.
I really like the topic you wrote about, everybody has things about them self they don't like, especially with apppearance. the reality is we can't change these things, people will love you for you don't worry. I thought your poem was excellent and the ideas to, but your flow is off in spots. Adding or subtracting words that aren't needed will help your flow. Your a great writter and you'll only get better with time. Fantastic poem 5/5