I love this poem, creates a great visual image, i don't know if this was supposed to make me smile but it did, great poem 5/5
JAde

It was so chilling and relaxing and there were good description of nature and natural things
And these repitition realy made me smile;

Snap. Snap.
It's the Venus fly trap.

It was awesome
Keep it up,
Laura

Darling, I made a song for this.
I've got the beat and the tune.
Snap, snap
It's the venus fly trap.
Perfect :]
I wish I could criticize more...
But I can't.
I wish I could to help you out more.
But I'm afraid a wonderful writer I am not.
My dear, you deserve the best.
5/5 :]

This waould be a cute poem but in truth the Venuse fly trap don't lurk, last I read they lay in wait mouth wide open until a fly or vermin come across its billowy pad and just when the fly or vermin think it ok it closes it leave leaving it victims helpless and hoing down the stem in a pool of acid where the body breaks down hmmm no lurking here. Good job it was enjoyable take crae Plot121

It was a very interesting poem. Excellently written. The repetition and onomatopoeia really added to it to make it more of a fun, sing-song poem. Very good work, keep it up. =)
5/5

This is interesting. I liked your use of onomatopoeias. Very well done. 5/5!