Aww thats really good, i hope everything works out for you, take kare xxxxxxx

Very nice and beautiful , good work 5/5
I'll appreciate your rating and comment for my poems

Your sincerely
Hani

I like this.
It was sweet.

5/5

Aww.. that was so sweet, yet, still heartbreaking.... I hope everything works out as well.

"I want you to listen to our song
and tell me that you don't think about me.
I want you to realize that you still love me
even after what happened."

^ I love those lines, I'm going through sort of the same problem as well, so I can relate. Wonderful job! 5.5

Stephanie Lynn .+.

Wow, i love how everyone says what i cant. this is my break up in a nut shell. added to fav.

Great piece u got there...i just loved it...i think u got love burning in your heart...*hugs u*...take care....handsome

I liked this one alot. know what your saying made a mistake that shouldn't had been made. and thanks for the comments.
.*.Kelsey...

Woow. It's so full of raw emotion and sadness. i'm sorry for your ordeal and hope that everything gets better for you. and try not to linger on the past too much. It tends to ruin your life, trust me. Keep on writing.

cesar

All songs seem that way, i know
i love your poem

This is a really good poem
keep up the nice work
See I kep my promises :)..
Anyways.
very good
I like it
and can somewhat relate to it.
XOXO
Chelsey