Very nice and beautiful , good work 5/5
I'll appreciate your comment and rating my poems

I added u to my favorite poets .. ^_^

I loved it ...i couldnt miss one single syllable.............it kept my attention

Very excellent poem! :) I very much like it!!

Honestly good piece I give u 4/5. The flow is good n I like it.

I love it keep on doing it

Damn good .. love the work..keep it up

~Wake~

Do u know what i liked most..about this poem.. its comes from the heart and goes through the heart..

Good poem.
Short but really nice.
Well done
Take care