Comments : Frankenstein

  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    Uncapitalize: alone, my, and an.

    Wonderful poem! I absolutely loved it. It's perfection!
    Great job.
    Keep it up! <3

  • 16 years ago

    by Startle Me

    So many questions as to why I'm here,
    This wretched creature that has no purpose.
    My creator has left me in a twist,
    [[Alone in this world with so much to fear.]]
    Your first three were fantastic.
    They were discriptive.
    I actually felt sorry for Frankenstein/you.
    Lol.
    Your last line I didn't like as much for some reason.
    It kind of felt forced.

    I read the whole poem.
    I'm speechless.
    Me? I dont' usually pay attention in school.
    I wouldn't write a poem for school either.
    You did both, doll.
    I'm proud of you.
    This is... fantastic.
    Awesome is stuck in my head,
    But I don't want to sound like a dork and say it.
    5/5, dear :]

  • 16 years ago

    by Chad Picard

    A poem inspired by Frankenstein? Not something I'd have thought of. Wonderfully executed! :]

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Nice poem with clear descriptions. great work 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Nice poem with clear descriptions. great work 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Wow...a poem during english class..lol...wow!!...amazing...=)
    This one is beautiful...u've portrayed this one as a good story-ish write....u've penned it in a good manner...well done!

    xxPoojaxx