Wow, this poem is written amazingly. I loved it. Kept me reading to the end. Keep up the great work 5/5
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My favourite stanza was:

This is how we did it:
Through a compromise.
Now we have what we wanted,
Though it took both our lives.

It was very deep and I just love it basicallly! I look forward to reading more poems of yours! 5/5

Chan
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I have read almost all of your poetry and I love them all. You really have a way of capturing emotions and putting them into words. I hope you continue to write more and post them so we can read them.

Sincerely,
Scarlet DeLoup