"The sky creates a painting
To portray young lovers,
Who are silently waiting,
As quiet as two doves."

I truly adore this poem. I hardly could even pick my favorite line or stanza because I find every one of them simply, strikingly penned. I'm unsure if it was intentional on your part, but I find this allusion of couples, images created by the clouds, quite exceptional and metaphorical in regards to the changing seasons! Ha! =D I like that...

As always, your pen generates such works which induce warmth to the reader's heart although this sincerity in composition came from the writer's soul. It was a joy to read! Thank you for sharing. (I read this awhile ago, but I didn't leave a comment immediately. Instead, I rated it a 5 as well as your other new piece.) Love, Debbie

The imageiary in this poem is perfect plus the flawless flow. Its a nice love piece. God bless u

With love
Fsams

Yuna,
When I read the title of this poem, the first thing that popped into my mind was the song with "Summer Lovin'" in it. Regardless of the song, this was a really great poem! It's kind of a common topic, but like your other poems, you gave it your own style.
Keep it up, 5/5

With all due respect,
Hatori

P.S. Great job in my contest! Thanks for entering as well!!

I love it!!! It brings me back to the heat of the moment when i first discovered the extreme powers that love and intimacy command. Thank you.

PrinceCharming,