GREAT flow and rhyme and message! This was beautifully worded and sweet. A poem that I truly enjoyed!
Charisma*

Aw nicley written, i wish guys would write poems like this about me lol

Aw nicley written, i wish guys would write poems like this about me lol

Like I said
If you add punctuation to this?
This would become oh so marvelous.

Your second stanza?
Beautiful write :]
They were sweet and your words?
Discriptive.

Third stanza?
I don't like the talk of demons in a love poem.
I mean... it's kind of random to me.

Honestly?
THe way you rhymed it seemed as though it was a nursery rhyme.
I'm sorry if I offended you.
It's just what I saw it as.

The flow was great...nthe poem was cute..very cute..n filled with love..this one had emotions penned beautifully...n the secnd stanza was the best...n i did'nt find fault with rhyme scheme too..it's good the way it is..
xxPoojaxx