Comments : Hoping for Better Days

  • 16 years ago

    by geeeeee

    "To live without air
    To sing without a voice
    To fly without wings
    To see without eyes"

    hah. you never cease to suprise and impress me missy. I love this kidddoo and her poetical skills that surpass mine :)
    !
    x

  • I love this gosh your talented i love reading your poems keep it the good work :) ~melissa~

  • 16 years ago

    by Gypsy

    I loved this, I wrote something similar to the opening part a while ago, but mine wasn't as good haha
    keep it up x

  • 16 years ago

    by illalwaysloveyou

    This is an awesome poem! i love it. its sad but i can definately relate to it and i think a lot of other people will able to too.

  • 16 years ago

    by MeltInHisArms

    I really like this poem!! i can relate 2 it right now! keep is up!

  • 16 years ago

    by Roxiee An

    To live when you dont ya its true to the point good work friend

  • 16 years ago

    by Roxiee An

    To live when you dont ya its true to the point good work friend

  • 16 years ago

    by Roxiee An

    Good poem
    loved it but ya hard emotions
    tc
    5/5 for it
    your friend
    Rohan