I liked it. It got a little choppy, but it had a lot of emotion

I liked it also, and I agree, it did get a little choppy but good, but wth is Rondel?

"I didn't mean to hurt you."

Its one of the worst feelings to know that you've hurt someone, when that wasnt what you intended. For a first go this was good, better than what I'd be able to strum together! With time and practise Im sure you can improve :)

Take Care.