Comments : Raped

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Wonderful job.
    This poem is hard, I can relate. The circumstances are different but still....

    This poem was so sad & your pain pours out through every word....

    "The only thing that keeps me let me keep my sanity is this razor
    I cut to live
    I cut to breath
    I cut to stop it all

    Ripping on the inside
    Riping on the out
    Riping in the mind
    Riping on the heart"

    ^ I love those 2 stanzas....
    Superb job! 5.5 Keep writing!

    Stephanie Lynn .+.

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie

    This poem hit me hard*
    My bad. =/