Comments : Too bad for heaven

  • 16 years ago

    by Zima Ultifera

    Very good dear birgit :D
    One of your best work sure is this :D
    Love it!! [L]!! :D

  • 16 years ago

    by The Black Rose

    This certainly isnt one of your best poems but its okay i think.
    btw: i think u'll go to the thing u name as: Heaven

    *hugs*

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    Yes, I thought so... hmm, this wasn't your best work but it certainly isn't horrible at all. It only needs more coherent details, I dare say. :) In any case, I believe that every person comes to the point of thinking these questions somewhere in their lives. :) But then again, I gladly have found the answers of the Truth. It is up to you now to discover the Knowledge and the Truth, my friend...Peace Profound...

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Haha it sounds interesting and free flow of feelings. Great work 5/5 keep writing dear