I love it. very good.

5\5

Most definately. Thats the same as my family.

Great poem. so sad, so strong so good =D keep it up! 5/5

Wow.....i loved it,,,i also loved the ending...good work...~*~Cindy~*~

Simply Amazing Poem. You've got talent.

Keep it up

I feel sorry for her. this is a good one my sister i love too much. keep it up.

Hey, i feel sorry for you if this is your real life but remember one thing cutting never solved anything.

as for the poem, i loved the flow of the short lines and i loved the ending too

I love this poem, great job, 100/100, it's going to my favorites, perfect! job.

I loved your poem very nice work 5/5 :P

That brought back memories, all cutters will be able to get this poem, its something i thank God everyday that i don't have to go through anymore. (not literally i'm not religious)

it so true that you don't wanna die you just wanna feel something apart from disapointment and numbness in your life, even if its pain, at least its something you can feel.

the structure is basic, so is the language, and the jist of the poem, theres no flattery and i guess this helps show the real emotions.

is this one of them poems, that you write but go into third person even though its you that going through this? or is it someone els eyou are writting about.

a negative would be that putting num bers like 90 in the middle of the poem is off putting spell the word fully. its also quite slangy.

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I love it. i feel the same way all the time.

I so LOVE this poem, it's so true to life for so many people!!!

Wow......this is extreme....

-Aly