Great write ,good flow and presented good, but were you talking about being in love with someone you can't have or what?I mean I really like it , it was good ,your friend Tracy

This is written really well and I understand where ur coming from as it is sometimes only a hope or a wish or a dream that gets us though the hardest times well done on this one.

Thanks :D
yeh, basically, thinking about someone and wondering what it would be like to be with them, but knowing its not gonna happen...

I can relate... Really good poem.

I love this poem its so emotional Very good