Very good poem!!! i have one suggestion at the bottom of the poem at this section:
"i neber want to see you again"
do you mean never instead of neber?
really sad and good poem.
peace

Good poem sky! is it about who i think it is? 5/5!

Amazing!!

"These broken ties,
And broken ends"

amazing lines right there, keep up the great work!

I loved the last stanza,
"These broken ties,
And broken ends
From you're lies
You used to be my friend"
it rocked my socks off, lol.
5/5.