Wow, amazing poem, really like it! im hoping this isnt a true story though...hope youre ok xx

One of your best for sure...it was funny because when I saw that title in the contest, I was like who in the world would do that? lol but you did it very nicely. This was a sad poem with some very good wording and it shows the danger of trusting those who "promise" you whatever you want to hear. A good piece! I loved the second stanza because it shows how easy it is to fall for someone like that. Good job!
5/5 for sure!
Charisma*

I love it...it happens all the time though =( It flowed perfectly GREAT JOB!!!

Omg..i luv it!!