I'm not sure as to why you chose to write a poem like this but i thank God you did. I struggle daily to cope with the same secret and its taring my heart apart. Good poem though!

With the comment apart,
Yea i feel exactly what you mean as its what i am going through right now.

Beautiful wording thou, Good Job!

The feeling of not being able to let the world know your feelings for someone is the WORST! i speak from experience and hope to never have to deal with it again..

this is a great poem and a very unique layout...Beautiful :)

I Love your poem. It really does describe a forbidden love!

Great poem! One of my favorites now.

--Iz

Great poem! One of my favorites now.

--Iz

I totally know where this is coming from. I am going through the EXACT same thing. Lovely piece!

I like it alot, very personal..Have a goood day.

I love the idea behind this poem. Great job!