Good poem. This is very sad and well written.
I have one suggestion at:
"yea just keep decievin her"
do you mean deceivin instead of decievin?
peace

Lool yea..spellin mistake ill fix it now :D thnx anyway..tc

Girl iloved it :):)

this is sad one but i loved it :):):)

keeeeeeeep on doing wht you doing:):):)

This is a sad poem but i see you put a lot of emotion into it which made it great!
Nice Job~you have a great talent!
5/5