Comments : Our Future

  • 16 years ago

    by kitkat girl

    Good poem, i really like the lines:
    "Teddy bears and rattles
    Dimples, chubby cheeks,
    Choo-choo trains and building blocks
    Curious instinct."
    it sounds soo cute!!
    peace

  • 16 years ago

    by SomeRomanticGuy

    Yet you produced an awesome poem.
    =D

  • 16 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Dear, you always come up with unique topics that i dont get to read in my everyday visit to P&Q, that is the reason your poems are great and greater.
    as always a 5/5 as you truly deserve it.