This is a really good poem and has a powerful message!!! It is soo sad! i really like the form of the beginning and middle of your poem!!
peace

Wow i couldnt imagine my best friend dying, wow, i feel depressed, nice poem 5/5 maybe u can read one of mine.

That happened to me. I saw her die...and i wish i could of read this poem then and not now.

I like your poem its cute
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