Very good poem. I liked it, kinda funny in a weird way lol. Anyways it has a good flow and I like how you used thee instead of an ordinary word. Keep it up!

Very nice. liked it.

This is a cute poem!!! I really like that you used the theme of a bear, quite unique!
peace

Ya it was funny but good job!

Aw so sweet and cute.

Made me smile.

5/5

~*Alex*~
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This is very good andrew, flows great, i give it a 5/5!! keep them coming!!!

It was really good in a different kinda way! good job! 5/5