Comments : Just the pain in my heart

  • I liked this alot keep it up 5/5 ~melissa~ maybe you can check out my poems and tell me wat you think

  • 16 years ago

    by Joey

    I liked this one 5/5.
    very nicely written

  • 16 years ago

    by Ixora

    I love this poem i dont know why no one commented on it so far...the symbolism is amazing:

    "My heart is entwined by thorns
    to keep from falling apart."

    i love that part..it just really got me...and thank u for the comment im glad u enjoyed the poem.

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