I agree with what the dude before me said pretty much.
And also, remember, emo is just a label, it is not who you are.

I have a frined like this. in my old school emo was like the 'cool thing' im not emo though. if this is seriously how you feel about all this, don't do it anyway. as for the criticism im not tryin to be rude or something, but you could try to put it in stanzas, or puttin a sentence on one line, its so depressing

"why cant i be pretty?
why cant i be cool?"

thats depressing... oh well.

Your peoms are great! keep up the good work. I can relate to this poem.
Simi *

This poem is written pretty good. 5/5
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You did a good job at capturing the feeling. if you read some of my older poems, you'll see that i used to write a lot like this... about the same kind of stuff. and trust me, things do get better. people really do care. i've found that out. they just don't always seem to show it. so hang in there... you'll find your place in life soon enough and everything will start to make sense.

Aww lyk this poem.. wz written pretty gud.. i give it 5/5 :) hope u alryt gurl.. nd oh God cares... ^__^ hope u can check mine 2.. tc olweiz..

Thant poem is chilling its great i love it very emotional

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Wow this is deep

Very nice write! keep up the good work!
god bless

Damn... i feel the emotion... poor from your writting. deep girl... great poem.
i hope its not all true though... and if so... life aint worth worrin about those fools... they'll be working 4 u one day! lol
4/5... good write

Deeply moving and emotionally wrapped. i can relate but i've learned to ignore the ignorant. they pitifully tease to build themselves up. just remember, their no one to judge especially when their lives are most likely more screwed up.

nice piece you have here. i like the questions you posed. it leaves readers thinking. good job.

This was such a sad poem...
For each person there is that special someone and I to think we all are ok just the way we are. If someone convinced you of the opposite, they are wrong. Just be yourself and be proud of who you are!

Take care and don't let them get you down!

Ingrid 5/5