Hey,
a very emotional poem, Loved it..I do wonder what that secret is, im kind of curious...I like the two line stanza and it flows nicely. keep up the good work 5.5
kisses stephanie

You are a great poetess. I loved al of your poems I read. This one had a great flow, wonderful word choice and a nice format. The emotions were deep and help make the poem interesting and easy to read and understand. I gave it a 5/5

The poem had alot of thoughts you left in the air but nothing really to tie them all together I guess I was just lost but I didn't see you close any of your words or thought tight enogh for the reader to care what th secret was. Plot121