That was really wonderful poem...Great courage to write about ur past love......
the name is NASEEBA am i correct??
Great poem!!!

God bless u

Hassan
What a wonderful poem. I know the love you feel here. The pain you have not having her in your life.

Every day in her thoughts
Every night in her memories
Like a crazy boy I have spent

This stanza really stands out.
Your love is Naseeba
Take care your friend Cindy

Naseeba? im not sure the poem was good though so nice job on that one

I love this poem. It's written amazingly. Very good job. Keep up the good work 5/5
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Wow!!..i mean this is soo touching,...n a great way to scream out the name of your old love.."Naseeba"..u've penned the name so perfectly with ease thru the poem...great style n good job too..
Touching poem
5/5
xxPoojaxx

Well done and keep writing, the love in this poem was amazing.

5/5 David

Is it Naseeba......well anyways it is a really nice poem i like it alot....

You're right about one thing! This is definitely more than a poem! It's love straight from the heart! Beautiful! 5/5

"Standing alone on the shore
I have seen the storm that
Were coming to murder my thoughts

Every movement I felt her touches
Inside my body there were cold voices
Covering the warmth of my heart"

This is my favourite part of the poem. You painted very alive picture in my mind.. A dark sky, a black thunder cloud, her evil thought moving there.. I feel cold to think about this..

One thing I must tell you is you have really a beautiful mind..