Comments : Ouch!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by softheart

    Nice but funny

  • 16 years ago

    by SHoRTy

    Good poem i like it!!
    stop by and give me sum comments!!! i would appricitate it

  • 16 years ago

    by 4EvErMaKeBeLiEvE

    You spoke so truly, I love it. But there will be another to mend you dear broken heart. I know how much that hurts....

  • 16 years ago

    by nikki

    I loved it, it was great you put your heart break in a funny way. the words you used were great. someone will be there and you will find them and know exactly what to give. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by secrets and lies Xo

    This is the way i felt when i walked in on my ex and my "friend" having a love fest! This is the type of poem that has so much emotion and it relates to reality!

  • 16 years ago

    by Rowena Smith

    Wow this is a great poem, I love it. I can relate to this poem (But not with a girl) with me and eight (Yes thats his name) He broke my heart and now I am wondering if there will ever be someone else and whether I'll have something to give to him if there is!