Wow. That is awesome. The imagry here rocks. I like how you speak of everlasting love and devotion. It's very pretty how you describe the person as an angel. Flow and everything is superb. Way to go! 5/5

Much Love,
.:Danielle:.

This is ahmazing.
keep it up.
wow. 5/5
<3jess

Excellent writing! 5/5

This is beautiful. She must be a lucky person for you to see her as an angel

Wow. This is beautiful.

"Angel of silver and light
no beauty that can compare"

^^ The first two lines alone drew me into the poem immediately.

"Human yet divine
only perfection in my eye
never fading love
ordained from above to
reign together forever"

^^ This is written wonderfully. This is my favourite part of the piece. It seems really heartfelt, and I like that.

"Beauty and brains, surpassing
expectations of kindness
smiles of joy unrivaled
to the rosy blush
of thoughts of her
wonderful king to be
entwined together, hand in hand
dreaming eternally of you"

^^ And the ending -- blew me away. You've done a very good job with the end. You've described things perfectly to the point where your words have painted a picture in my mind.

Good job.

5/5

-Briana