This poem is so very sad. The sadness comes through in your words.

In the black i start to cry
As i lay and wonder why
My life appears to be a lie
Sitting up i heave a sigh

This stanza really touched me.
Take care Cindy

Hey This is a sweet poem I really do like you poetry, you really do express yourself
kathryn xx

Woow .,. great poem .. deep feeling .. it's one of my favorites .. good job

I thought it was extremely good. You remind me about how one of my friends writes and she helps me with all of mine!