Comments : Forget Every Kiss

  • 16 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    Wow i can relate on this one!! I really loved it simple yet filled with intense emotions.And by the way, i really likes this line, great advice huh =)

    "don't let love bring you down,
    yes wipe off that frown.
    because frankly I have two things to say
    and the second is this:
    forget every kiss
    and everything that he said
    now wipe off those tears
    and don't linger here
    because life has so much more in store

  • 16 years ago

    by Tim Mauntler

    Great poem... it was really good in the sense that it sounded like you were making a speach or talking to a person one on one, but still poetic... great work, keep it up