Mike, what can I say, that was beautiful..So passionate and your words flow beautifully together.. Your are truly a wonderful poet.I hope one day that you find your love that you are longing for...Untill Next Time Take Care..Sara

hey mike, exellent job. i loved this poem, i cant wait to read your other work... its beautifully written. theres passion in your words, thats more than we can say for a lot of writers these days...this comes from your heart...thank you for sharing.
check out mine some time
rose oxo

Beautiful poem, Mike! Very flowy and sweet. Lucky girl this is dedicated to! Thanks for commenting on mine, I'm glad I made ya smile.

Thanks to everyone of you guys that have commented on my poems. You have all been really nice and I appreciate any insight or criticism you are willing give. I try to make a point check out the poems of everyone who comments on mine. I usually comment and vote on them as well. Thank you for all your support guys, it really means a lot!