But your good looks and shoes alone just won't get you by.

oh burn.
my joke was thrown in my face.
no sarcasm.
i guess i really made you miffed.

Sheena, I really liked this poem. The repetition of the lines really added emphasis to the whole thing. The title reallly dragged me in and the whole poem was well done. The ryhme was good and the flow was flawless. :]

Awshit. she called me an aropant a hole. xD this is my mahfawkin poem. that isn't exactly good. but now that we're okay...ian is a;;mahfawkin killer, with my shoes.

Another interesting piece. The emotion is bitter, and I always love reading about bitterness and downright annoyance.

The flow was wonderful, word usage, structure, everything - I loved it.

5/5.

'But, go ahead baby, sell your soul to the girl next door,
You said it yourself, hunny, you're not commercial wh0re.'
^ My favorite lines

Amazing poem.
Great wording, and flow.
Nothing wrong with it that I seen.
Keep it up. :]

'You aggravate me to the point of extinction'

hahaha, by far, the GREATEST part of this poem.

I hate when beautiful people know their beautiful and feel the need to tell everyone. It's one of the most assinine things a person can do and it annoys me to no end. I love you deeply. Seriously, this poem is the ultimate 'I Hate Beautiful People' thing I've ever seen in my life. 5/5 lol