I really liked it. It was really simple, yet the words were so powerful, and the end!!! LOVE! No, in a seriousness, It was very good, very moving, and I'll tell you now... Keep Writing!!! You are very good
~Danielle~

I can relate to this poem... Emotional and deep, 5/5.

Awesome poem!!! i luved it!!! nd i luv all ur others as well!! u have an amazing talent nd an excellent way of conveying emotion and feeling!!!!! i wish i could write as well as u!
5/5
luv Fallen xx

Wow!...beautiful...simple yet so so beautiful
Excellent choice of words put to togther to convey deep emotions...n i flowed well...
Good job!

xxPoojaxx

WOW!!!!