Comments : Echoes of Loneliness

  • 16 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    Tonya,

    Excellent write. Wonderful flow, and so sad.

    "In my humbled walls of desolate silence
    My heart bares the weight of distress
    Detecting the sound of an empty abode
    I am deafened by echoes of loneliness"

    Loved this stanza.

    "I am deafened by echoes of loneliness"
    Sometimes, silence screams louder than words.

    ~~Bravo~~

    Always,
    Jeannie

  • 16 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Tonya,

    I have not read one of your poems a quite a long time and I do miss reading them. You have also been missed. This is a very mournful poem and indded very sad. I hope all is well.

    Warm regards,

    Steve

  • 16 years ago

    by mohamad aref numan

    Very impressive one

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr M

    So very good.

  • 16 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    The blood of a poets broken heart shows up well on the white page with words that show the cracks and depths of that wounded heart. Keep up the good works.